Sunday, May 29, 2011

A Message to a Person I Miss

I stared at the sunset,
stared long and hard to forget
but I see you there,


I closed my eyes and wish
your memories would leave me
but they refused to go.

I wandered outside to places
and tried to think of something else,
but my mind refused to focus.

No matter how I tried to deny it,
the fact still remains,
I miss you!


4 comments:

  1. Wow...what a great poem...love it. Another masterpiece of yours.

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  2. Hello Bing,

    Thanks for the visit. I am flattered you like this simple poem. Sorry not being able to visit. I'll do it in the weekend.

    Take good care of yourself.

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  3. ows, pertaining so someone? It"s a heartfelt, bone shivering indept feelings.... truly it happened to those who really missed a love one.. indeed a masterpiece from a great writer....

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  4. ows,..pertaining to someone? indeed a heartfelt reality to someone you missed... well said ...

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